Petals Upon the Wind

Updated on July 12, 2017
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I'm a writer, a poet, a dreamer. Born and raised in New York City. I now live in Daytona Beach, Florida with my wonderful cat Sid.

Looking back to their love,

she could remember,

his words always so soft and tender –

like petals upon the wind.

Always there beside her,

holding hands,

laughing like children,

enjoying life –

so very much in love.

As time passed,

the loving words,

like a river that freezes,

in the wintertime –

stopped flowing.

Looking into smoldering dark eyes,

no brightness there,

the lies kept coming faster –

like petals upon the wind.

One day it all just ended,

leaving her to go on alone,

making her wonder –

where they’d taken the wrong turn.

Sparkling memories

and silver tears remained,

in the darkest night,

she could still see it all,

hear the words,

that once rang true –

now just petals upon the wind.

It made it harder,

in the summertime,

when she wandered alone,

along the garden paths,

seeing the many roses that bloomed,

remembering him there beside her,

knowing that when the autumn came,

it would also take the beauty of the roses –

scattering their petals upon the wind.

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        Gypsy Rose Lee 

        13 months ago from Riga, Latvia

        You welcome Mike.

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        DREAM ON 

        13 months ago

        Love is impossible to stop. It comes and it goes. It builds and it grows. Love is so beautiful. Your poem captured the love and the loss. Very deep and emotional. Thank you for sharing.

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        Gypsy Rose Lee 

        14 months ago from Riga, Latvia

        Thank you Jackie.

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        Jackie Lynnley 

        14 months ago from The Beautiful South

        Very beautiful...and love the song, too.

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        Gypsy Rose Lee 

        15 months ago from Riga, Latvia

        Thank you Mike.

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        mckbirdbks 

        15 months ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

        Hello Gypsy - This is a potent piece of writing. Well done.

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        Gypsy Rose Lee 

        15 months ago from Riga, Latvia

        Thank you Louise. Barbara has quite a few songs that inspire.

        Thank you Ann.

        Thank you ThreeKeys and that is so true about love.

        Thank you Terrie.

        The oddest things can happen FlourishAnyway when love is not true.

        Thank you Cynthia.

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        Cynthia B Turner 

        15 months ago from Georgia

        Beautiful poem. Love is all about taking a chance. You can never know how the story will end. Take care.

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        FlourishAnyway 

        15 months ago from USA

        One of my relatives had a marriage like that. She thought it was lovely and learned it was one big charade. You couldn't make up the stuff that happened to her.

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        Terrie Lynn 

        15 months ago from Canada

        This is very beautiful. Sad and thought provoking at the same time. Well done, It touched my heart. Have a good day.

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        threekeys 

        15 months ago

        Lovely soft imagery. I could see the "petals upon the wind".

        Love can be short sometimes and you wonder if it was just about loving rather than being in love.

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        Ann Carr 

        15 months ago from SW England

        Beautifully constructed, haunting poem! That Barbara Streisand song fits perfectly.

        Ann

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        Louise Powles 

        15 months ago from Norfolk, England

        That's a lovely piece of poetry. I like the Barbara Steisand song too, was singing along to that. =)

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