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A "Scary" Monster Paragraph

Just some creative writing I decided to do...

One day in late October the world seemed to turn upside down and everything went wrong. I saw terrible creatures lurking outside, as I looked out the dusty window. Out there I saw gruesome witches, and vampires that longed to have a deep drink from innocent youth. Werewolves lurked in the shadows, blood dripping from their skeletal jaws. One repulsive creature stood out to me the most. He had dark red lips and pale eyes, like faded parchment. His hair, long and black like the sky outside, blew in the wind. A flowing, dark veil wrapped around his shoulders, reflected his twisted mind. Slowly he started walking towards my abode through the eerie night. My heart quickened, all my senses were alert, and my throat tightened. It knocked upon my door, and I, though full of fear opened the door, for my overwhelming curiosity had taken over. The strange being looked at me and said an inexplicable phrase, “Trick or treat.”


ghsxfjhxfgjsfgj on October 10, 2013:

that was really good .. Wow keep it up

afrina on February 15, 2012:

I like the ending......

Anonymous on January 12, 2011:

That was nice language! I like the ending

epigramman on May 20, 2010:

That was such a good scare. Oxymoron - good scare?

That was such a good scare that I forgot to go to the bathroom!

You're not related to Edgar Allan Poe by any chance?

Zac828 from England on March 29, 2010:

Nice pay-off at the end, good language, well done and put more on here!

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