Love's Promises
My #26 for National Poetry Month
if each day you find
me, tangled in
music and words,
bits of me enmeshed in their web
i will find you too.
if each day you smile
at me
presenting love
on your lips,
my own will return
the favor soon enough
for i know
all we need
begins and ends here.
© 2017 Audrey Howitt
Comments
Very nicely composed lyrical poem
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Thank you juneaukid!
Audrey, that's another beautiful poem. Such a heart felt poem.
Love is all that's needed. Beautiful Audrey!
Simple and sweet. Almost not like you. Charming!
That was very sweet. I love anything about love.
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You crack me up Manatita! Thank you! And thank you Louise, Ruby and Rachel!
Absolutely splendid!
Musical, lyrical, lovely.
- hari
"And in the end, the love you take, is equal to the love you make. " Thank you Audrey, thank you John and Paul.
Yes it does. Beautiful. Jamie
All we need is love :) Beautiful poem!
Lovely thoughts and sentiments, a beautiful write.
Wonderful poetic thoughts. Audrey I have been trying to keep up and even putting 3 or 4 poems nicely numbered in my poetry blog but despite keeping up my own way I am glad it ends tomorrow. The journey as usual has been exciting.
Love and attention are always good themes. To have them centered in your poem is even better.
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Thank you MsDora!
Hi Audrey - You are playing all your emotions like harp strings.
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