Love's Promises
My #26 for National Poetry Month
if each day you find
me, tangled in
music and words,
bits of me enmeshed in their web
i will find you too.
if each day you smile
at me
presenting love
on your lips,
my own will return
the favor soon enough
for i know
all we need
begins and ends here.
© 2017 Audrey Howitt
Comments
Hi Audrey - You are playing all your emotions like harp strings.
- AUTHOR
Thank you MsDora!
Love and attention are always good themes. To have them centered in your poem is even better.
Wonderful poetic thoughts. Audrey I have been trying to keep up and even putting 3 or 4 poems nicely numbered in my poetry blog but despite keeping up my own way I am glad it ends tomorrow. The journey as usual has been exciting.
Lovely thoughts and sentiments, a beautiful write.
All we need is love :) Beautiful poem!
Yes it does. Beautiful. Jamie
"And in the end, the love you take, is equal to the love you make. " Thank you Audrey, thank you John and Paul.
Musical, lyrical, lovely.
- hari
Absolutely splendid!
- AUTHOR
You crack me up Manatita! Thank you! And thank you Louise, Ruby and Rachel!
Simple and sweet. Almost not like you. Charming!
Love is all that's needed. Beautiful Audrey!
Audrey, that's another beautiful poem. Such a heart felt poem.
- AUTHOR
Thank you juneaukid!
Very nicely composed lyrical poem
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