Cruel Words and Rose Thorns: A Poem (With Bonus Haiku)
Farewell Poetry Month, April 2017
These poems bid my farewell and final contribution to this year's (2017) Poetry Month. I hope you enjoy.
Cruel Words and Rose Thorns
A spiky rose thorn
Pierces skin,
Drawing blood
From deep within.
Cruel words can do
The very same,
Causing wounds
That will remain.
Rose Haiku One (Skin Deep)
A rose so pretty
but beware its thorny stem
disguised as beauty.
Rose Haiku Two (Color Scents)
A rose may be red
and a violet be blue,
but which smells sweeter?
Rose Haiku Three (True Beauty)
A yellow rose grows
among the thistles and weeds.
True beauty shines through.
© 2017 John Hansen
Comments
AUTHORI am humbled by your generous comment, Kenneth. Talent is in the eye of the beholder, as is beauty. Glad you were moved by this. Will talk to you soon.
Wow, Jodah!
I am moved by this poem. And the gorgeous graphics.
You are much more talented than I.
I mean it, dear friend. I could learn from you.
And do not blush--for it is the truth.
Please keep in touch with me for (due to my health) I do not know when my next sabbatical may be).
Kenneth
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Hi, Tamara. Yes, I try to have a deeper meaning in most of my writing, and hopefully not too far below the surface. Glad you found this enjoyable.
I did enjoy this poem of yours with deep and important meaning.
Tamara
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Hi Shauna. Thank you for that lovely comment. No, I don't think you told me that before, but I am honoured. Between you, and MsDora who said I was one of only two poets whose work she read regularly.. What more could I ask?
John, this final ode to Poetry Month is as breathtaking as the flowers you feature in this hub. You are truly talented, my friend. Have I told you you're my favorite poet?
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Yes, you are right, Lawrence. People can be prickly and not always realize how much they are hurting others. Glad you enjoyed this.
So true on both counts. Roses may be beautiful, but they have 'prickly' stems to protect the Rose, just like we're often 'prickly'.
I wonder if we realise the damage we do to others?
Really enjoyed this
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Thank you very much, Debangee. Glad you enjoyed this.
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Yes, Chris. Life is certainly a rose. Thanks for the birthday wishes..it is just past midnight here now. Much appreciated.
Thorns may be present here and there disguised in beauty. Very well said . Absolutely loved it.
Life is a rose, isn't it, John? The beautiful and the painful. Happy birthday, friend. I know it's probably past by now down your way, but I woke up this morning to a helpful notification.
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Thank you for reading, Jo, and for the lovely comment. So glad it brightened your day. I am sure your flowers are beautiful.
Thank you for this beautiful offering to cheer me this morning. It's my favorite time of year, and I've been busy during these spring days nurturing my flowers as they begin to bloom. It's so pleasant to come here and see your tribute to roses and poetry.
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Thank you John. Your comment is greatly appreciated.
I did Like this poem. It spoke to my spirit and said more than words. Good work John my Friend. I am keeping this on Hand. John
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That is so true, Venkat. Thank you for reading.
Beautiful poems and Haiku poetry. Roses are so beautiful! But, they come with their thorns. Just like Happiness comes with sad moments and sorrows.
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Thank you, Debangee. I appreciate that.
Rhythmic poems with inspirational, worthwhile, relevant meaning.
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Thank you as always, Shyron. Glad you enjoyed these poems, photos and the video.
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Yes, you are right Linda. Roses are strange flowers but I love them. Thank you for your kind words.
John, the poems and pictures are beautiful and I love the video very much.
Blessings always
These are nice poems to celebrate the end of Poetry Month, John. I love roses, although they are strange flowers. They can give us both beauty and pain, as your poems describe so well.
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Thanks for the encouraging comment, Michael. Blessings.
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Thanks for reading, Clive. That is always appreciated.
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Bill, I have heard blackberries can be hard to control. I don't seem to have much trouble growing roses though. Once they are established they just need sunlight and very little care. Perhaps you get too much rain. Thanks for reading.
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MsDora, there have been some wonderful poems written by my fellow poets this last month. Glad you enjoyed my humble contribution.
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Thank you, Vasantha. I appreciate that.
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Thanks, Mike. I tried my best. I have fallen behind in reading your hubs unfortunately but I will be over to check them out soon..promise.
Hello John - You offer fine contributions to poetry month.
lovely haiku poetry, well done!!
Your farewell poems do justice to the rose and the lessons they teach. What a powerful end to the expert offerings you illustrious poets have given during this month!
Roses and blackberries are my nemesis...one I can't grow well and the other I can't get rid of. That has nothing to do with you fine poetry. Just a random thought. :)
appreciate the share friend
Impressive poetry
Uncompromising message
Ambitious but true
Thorns is feasible
Never words to remove
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Devika, what a wonderful comment. Thank you.
Hi your poetry is beautiful and deep! You shared with beautiful photos and lots of emotions.
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Thank you so much, Audrey. Glad you enjoyed these.
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Thank you, Ruby for always supporting my poetry. I am so glad you can relate and enjoy.
Alluring variety of poetry and a pleasant way to say goodbye to this years poetry month. I've enjoyed each one John.
John your poetry is beautiful and meaningful in many ways. I also loved the video, which is an all time favorite of mine.....
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Thank you, Lori. Much appreciated.
Roses are my favorite flower and poetry is my favorite medium of writing. You did both justice here. Nice work John.
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They sure can, Coffeequeen. Thank you so much for your kind words.
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I don't write haiku often, Manatita. But thought I'd get a few in before the end of US poetry month. Glad you enjoyed these, and love roses.
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I knew you were a rose lover, Eric. Thanks for the kind words. How can anyone not love that song?
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Thanks for stopping to smell the roses, Mark.
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Yes, Threekeys. Life is like a rose. Thanks for reading, and happy Hubbing.
Yes, words can hurt and remain. Beautiful poetry and true words.
Really excellent haiku's bro. I see you're using my favourite flower. Nice!
I love contemplating words and growing my roses. And I love John's poetry. You hit a grand slam on this one. Thank you.
Oh yes I love that song.
Some sweet smelling poems. Thanks John
Life comes with moments of sweetness together with moments of bitter sweetness just as the rose has sweet beauty but comes with its sharp thorns. Love your images. Farewell to American Poetry month 2017, too. Thankyou Jodah.
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