Anybody Else Here Alive ?

Updated on August 25, 2020
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Short stories are at the heart of why Phyllis loves to write. Her father left her a legacy of the art of storytelling.

It was so Dark

He didn't know if his eyes were open or closed.
He didn't know if his eyes were open or closed. | Source

Scared and Breathing Hard

“Anybody else here alive?” Matt called out. He had woken up with a jerk. He was scared and breathing hard. It was so dark he did not know if his eyes were open or closed. The pounding in his head was making his ears roar. He reached up to touch his head and felt sticky, matted hair. It was October 14, 1953.

“I’m here,” a nearby voice called back. “You are not alone. Breathe slowly and remain calm. You will be alright, just a small cut on your head. You lost your helmet when you fell and your head hit a rock. I’ll tear some strips from your undershirt and bandage the wound. And you twisted your ankle, it is swollen and sprained. I will wrap that the best I can.”

Matt heard and felt his undershirt ripping, then felt strips wrapping around his head. “There. I’ll tie this on the other side so the knot won’t irritate the cut.” Then the man wrapped Matt's ankle with more strips.

“Thank you …,” Matt reached out to take the man’s hand, but could not see where he was. “I don’t know your name. I’m Matt Rees.”

“Ollie,” the man answered. “Ollie Morgan. Been coal mining for so long this is like my home down here. You’re pretty young, been down before?”

“Once before,” Matt paused a few seconds. “Looks like this may be my last time if I die here. Anybody else here alive?”

Hold on Matt

“Now, hold on. You ain’t gonna die. I’ll see that you get out safely. Rescue workers have already got several men out just on the other side of that rock and rubble wall there. They will be breaking through soon. But, you ain’t safe here. That other beam above us is creaking and will give way any minute. I’m going to help you up on your feet and guide you to a safe place close to where the workers will break through.”

Matt feared that everyone else had been killed. He asked again, “Anybody else here alive?”

“There is no one else here. You were further along than the others in the tunnel and got separated from them when all that rubble came down. Come on, let’s go!”

Matt felt strong arms pull him up gently. He almost passed out again but held steady with Ollie’s help. “I can’t see!”

“That’s okay. I’m used to the dark. I can see enough to get you up there to safety.” Ollie put one arm around Matt’s waist. “Put your arm over my shoulders, Matt.”

Together they stumbled their way to safety. They got away just as the beam behind them fell and more rocks crashed down. Matt began shaking from fear. Ollie sat him down and leaned him back against the wall. “You hold on, Matt. They will be here soon.”

Matt passed out several times over the next few hours. Each time he came to, Ollie was there with water for Matt to sip. Once, Matt began panicking. “We’re gonna die! We’re gonna die! It’s getting colder!” Ollie held him tight till Matt calmed down.


From somewhere bright light beams were searching the area. The rescue workers had broken through. Matt covered his eyes when a light beam shown on him. His head was hurting bad. “We found him,” a worker yelled. Within minutes Matt lay on a stretcher and was being carried out of the tunnel. He opened his eyes to see if Ollie was following. He saw Ollie’s face back in the tunnel just before another cave-in crashed down and Ollie was gone. He screamed out Ollie’s name several times before he passed out again.

The Foreman

“Did you say, Ollie Morgan saved your life, son? Ol’ Ollie has saved the lives of many young men in disasters like this.”

Matt, with tears streaming down his blackened face, looked up at the foreman. “And now he’s gone after saving me! How many disasters has Ollie been in?”

“Only one, son. Ollie Morgan died forty years ago in the 1913 Senghenydd coal mine explosion and fire in South Wales.”

Matt Yells for Ollie

In seconds Ollie was gone.
In seconds Ollie was gone. | Source

Author's Note

Both Matt and Ollie are fictional characters.

Mining has always been especially dangerous, because of explosions, roof cave-ins, and the difficulty of underground rescue. The worst single disaster in British coal mining history was at Senghenydd in the South Wales coalfield. On the morning of 14 October 1913 an explosion and subsequent fire killed 436 men and boys. Only 72 bodies were recovered.

© 2019 Phyllis Doyle Burns


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    • Phyllis Doyle profile imageAUTHOR

      Phyllis Doyle Burns 

      17 months ago from High desert of Nevada.

      Hi Peggy, and thank you for such an uplifting comment.

      The Senghenydd mine disaster was very tragic - they recovered less than one fourth of the bodies and their were over 400 victims. Sad indeed.

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      Peggy Woods 

      17 months ago from Houston, Texas

      What a terrific story! You are an excellent storyteller!

      That explosion and fire which took so many lives at Senghenydd in the South Wales coalfield are a tragic part of mining history.

    • Phyllis Doyle profile imageAUTHOR

      Phyllis Doyle Burns 

      17 months ago from High desert of Nevada.

      Hi Dianna. Thank you for the kind praise. Coal mining families do live within the shadow of death all the time. It is a harsh life and the people do have courage and strength. Thanks for reading and commenting.

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      Dianna Mendez 

      17 months ago

      Very well told! I've lived in the coal mining area and the people live within the shadow of death daily. I met some pretty amazing strong individuals there as well, they taught me a few things about life.

    • Phyllis Doyle profile imageAUTHOR

      Phyllis Doyle Burns 

      17 months ago from High desert of Nevada.

      Hi MizB. Hope all is well with you. Thank you for reading and commenting. Yes, Ollie is a guardian angel and did see Matt through a bad time. So glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks again.

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      Doris James MizBejabbers 

      17 months ago from Beautiful South

      Wonderful story, Phyllis. Since I believe so strongly in guardian angels, toward the end I began to suspect that Matt might be one. We had coal mining here in Arkansas for years. My best friend lost her father to black lung disease.

    • Phyllis Doyle profile imageAUTHOR

      Phyllis Doyle Burns 

      17 months ago from High desert of Nevada.

      Thank you, John. So glad you like this story - it is one of my favorites, because it practically wrote itself and very quickly. Yes, you have read it before when I had it on TCE awhile back. Thanks again. Take care.

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      John Hansen 

      17 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Great flash fiction Phyllis. I kept feeling I had heard or seen this story before, but it was a wonderful read none the less.

    • Phyllis Doyle profile imageAUTHOR

      Phyllis Doyle Burns 

      17 months ago from High desert of Nevada.

      Hi Ann. Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed the story. Yes, Wales has suffered a lot of coal mine disasters. Thanks for contributing to the history with your comment.

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      Ann Carr 

      17 months ago from SW England

      Great story, skilfully told, Phyllis. I didn't suspect until a second before the end that Ollie wasn't alive! Brilliant!

      Wales is a country that has suffered so many coal disasters. The worst I remember was the Aberfan slip which buried a school - that was due to rain and weak ground because of the mine shafts.



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