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A Change In Plans (Poem)

Updated on August 12, 2016

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Explain again the rules to me

Just how we thought this all would be

We put it down so carefully

Is this the world we thought we’d see


What made our expectations change

What forced our plans to rearrange

What is the hope in an exchange

What point did things become this strange


Or maybe this was meant to be

Perhaps it’s us who cannot see

Enjoy our world more carefully

Your whispers too call out to me

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    • ChitrangadaSharan profile image

      Chitrangada Sharan 5 months ago from New Delhi, India

      Nice poem!

      In fact the plans are made by ' him' . We only execute them.

      Thank you for sharing!

    • BlossomSB profile image

      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 5 months ago from Victoria, Australia

      I really like this one, there's only one thing missing - the One whose plans for us are perfect.

    • Michael-Milec profile image

      Michael-Milec 5 months ago

      Oh, yes brother.

      We marvel, wondering

      seeking and asking

      till we rest in His perfect will.

    • Gypsy Rose Lee profile image

      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      Lovely poetry. Enjoyed.

    • Deb Hirt 4 months ago

      I cannot think of anything more true.

    • Faith Reaper profile image

      Faith Reaper 3 months ago from southern USA

      Yes, we can make our plans, but the reality is the plans He has for us are so much better ...

      Blessings

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