A Wish List
My # 12 for National Poetry Month
the thoughts I speak to no one
find utterance in the first
rays of morning sun
as i feel myself fall
through you
feel your skin give way
wrap itself around me
feel two heartbeats in the place
of one
I want your desire to form in me
feel it take root
press itself on my tongue
until wet with you
I find myself.
i want to fall through the dry wall
next to me, feel the paint crack
and the sheet rock
fill my nostrils
feel myself grow smaller
i want to find every hair and molecule of you
in this bed
find my way inside
the richness of your laugh
the air around you
when I wrap myself
into you,
I remember
the way home.
Comments
Audrey---A great piece of sensual poetry, indeed.
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Thank you Val--
Hello Audrey - A lover's wish, if I have ever heard one. You have the pace of this poetry challenge well under control.
Oh, this is your best. What a wish list...Beautiful!
Wow. Most romantic lines I've ever read.
Excellent. Audrey.
- hari
You took me into a expereince of sensuality and desire. Wonderful Audrey!
You are a lover, Audrey. Did't you write a great piece about being 59 or was it 60? Enjoy!
Beautiful imagery.
Superb!
That is some fine poetry !
So intimately sweet! This from a poet of great class and style, Audrey.
Lovely and wonderful poetic thoughts.
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Thank you threekeys
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Hi Mark--Thank you!
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Thank you Rasma!
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Well thank you kindly Flourish!!!
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It was Love at 59 Manatita! Thank you for remembering it!
Ah! Some lucky one. lol.
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Thank you Ruby!!
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Thank you Mike!
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Thank you Manatita!
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