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A Day With Two Dawns (Poetry by Galaxyrat)

Updated on August 23, 2017
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GalaxyRat is fond of rats and writing. And dark poetry. She knows that people don't like all these things together... but who cares?

For as the sun rises in the East,

today it dies at its peak.

As the good cannot stay,

The golden age fades away

The moon sings its last song,

The day has its second dawn.

© 2017 GalaxyRat


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      GalaxyRat 12 days ago from The Crazy Rat Lady's House

      Thanks again Tamara!

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      Tamara Moore 12 days ago

      I did not realize I had already commented on this lovely poem already, but this one was well worth a repeat visit! Magnificent poetry!


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      GalaxyRat 2 weeks ago from The Crazy Rat Lady's House

      :) Thanks Tamara, your comment is appreciated!

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      Tamara Moore 3 weeks ago

      Wondrous poem!

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      GalaxyRat 3 weeks ago from The Crazy Rat Lady's House

      Thanks Flourish! I am just real busy lately!

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      FlourishAnyway 4 weeks ago from USA

      I hope you enjoyed Eclipse Day! Glad to see you back!